Sparks Flew As Eyes Locked,
Unuttered Words Heard Aloud;
Soulmate Found, Puzzle Solved!
That’s my very first haiku.. 🙂 hope you liked it!
~ Yuvathi ❤ 🙂
Valentine Special #1 : My Only Puzzle.
Sparks Flew As Eyes Locked,
Unuttered Words Heard Aloud;
Soulmate Found, Puzzle Solved!
That’s my very first haiku.. 🙂 hope you liked it!
~ Yuvathi ❤ 🙂
The Confused Young Adult 
6 syllables in last line. Also, not about nature, as is traditional. Not essential these days to be about nature.
Happy as we are,
We rely on our good health
To keep us in smiles.
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Yeah, but I wanted to write it traditionally.. Oh no… How did I miss it. I mistook puzzle 😦
Next time I will be more careful and accurate 🙂
Thank u so much for your comment 🙂
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I read it several times – mesmerizing and beautiful!
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thank u very much for reading 🙂 am glad u liked it! 🙂
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Those are techniques. The thought it always the moat important thing in writing. The words cradle the thought like the craft of a gentle mother.
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That’s amazing! 🙂 beautifully put. I shall keep that in mind!
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semma 🙂
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thanks!! 🙂
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Have not traditionally been into poetry, but the more of it I read, the more I like it. Great job! http://lilypupslife.wordpress.com/
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Yeah… That’s just poetry 🙂
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I showed this to my husband and he smiled. ❤
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Aaawwww..! That made my day! Am so glad 🙂
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Aww!!
That was awesome yaar…
😍😍😍
doing JAPA with those lines😊😊😉
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