Valentine Special #1 : My Only Puzzle.

Valentine Special #1 :  My Only Puzzle.
Valentine Special #1 : My Only Puzzle.

Sparks Flew As Eyes Locked,

Unuttered Words Heard Aloud;

Soulmate Found, Puzzle Solved!

That’s my very first haiku..Β πŸ™‚ hope you liked it!Β 

~ Yuvathi ❀ πŸ™‚

The Confused Young Adult

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13 thoughts on “Valentine Special #1 : My Only Puzzle.

  1. Kenneth Finton February 3, 2015 / 12:58 am

    6 syllables in last line. Also, not about nature, as is traditional. Not essential these days to be about nature.

    Happy as we are,
    We rely on our good health
    To keep us in smiles.

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    • Yuvathi February 3, 2015 / 9:00 am

      Yeah, but I wanted to write it traditionally.. Oh no… How did I miss it. I mistook puzzle 😦
      Next time I will be more careful and accurate πŸ™‚
      Thank u so much for your comment πŸ™‚

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  2. wh1z February 3, 2015 / 7:21 am

    I read it several times – mesmerizing and beautiful!

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    • Yuvathi February 3, 2015 / 9:06 am

      thank u very much for reading πŸ™‚ am glad u liked it! πŸ™‚

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  3. Kenneth Finton February 3, 2015 / 10:14 am

    Those are techniques. The thought it always the moat important thing in writing. The words cradle the thought like the craft of a gentle mother.

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    • Yuvathi February 3, 2015 / 10:28 am

      That’s amazing! πŸ™‚ beautifully put. I shall keep that in mind!

      Like

    • Yuvathi February 4, 2015 / 7:28 am

      Yeah… That’s just poetry πŸ™‚

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  4. sriram February 5, 2015 / 12:38 am

    Aww!!
    That was awesome yaar…
    😍😍😍
    doing JAPA with those linesπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

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